Daniel+X+II

== =Tyler Mercado=

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Quote: with the body of a six-hundred pound lion, a giant ant's head with wicked-sharp mouth parts, and a stinger on its tail the size of a baseball bat

Response: When I read this I was shocked. That sounds like most terrifying beast ever, but definitely not the strongest. Daniel X actually going to fight it that is crazy that thing sounds unstoppable not to mention it's disgusting. I could not even imagine fighting that creature.

Quote: So I changed myself into one ....ant-lion versus elephant-spider. I raised my tail and fired a tangle web....I kind of changed th ant-lion memory

Response: When I read this I was confused. I know he has the power to create but since when cab he combined creatures together. How did he change the memory of an animal or alien. This is so confusing.

Quote:Not to say light's slowness doesn't have it's uses...If he were looking through his telescope right now, what he'd see instead of you reading this boom is picture of whatever was happening one hundred years ago

Response: I need to stop and think when I read this. what could be faster than light and what would it look like to see something that fast. what does it mean images of light from light years away are different then what is presently going on. Does that mean what we see might not be what is presently happening. This idea is giving me a headache.

Quote: Number 5 ignored the out burst. "In fact, I'm honored they got turned into crispy critters, I mean- so I have a good idea of what an upstanding alien hunter you must be. You know, I may even have some footage of them around here somewhere."

Response: I was shocked when I read this. Number 5 was there when Daniels parents were killed. Let alone that how did he manage to film all of that without Daniel even noticing him. If number five has footage of Daniel's parents would he go and find it or will he avenge his parents and attack Number 5.

Quote: "Humans"..."Lot's" of them"..They were partting around the van staggering and barley alart intent on moving foward their faces inches away from cellphones, blackberries, and portable game platforms...Maybe to get filmed and melted

Response: I was confused when I read this. How are they so unaware that they don't even notice the van and then keep walking. I undestand Number 5 is strong but how did he hack into every one's eltrical devices and hypmotize them into doing what he says and why does he destroy his minions in the end. Number 5 makes no sense.

Quote: "It's very moving" he said "The part wher your mom cries like a little girl is pure emotion, but my personal favorite scene is where your dad begs Number 1 for his life.

Response: I needed to stop and think when I read this. What kind of monster could watch and film the death of two other aliens. How could he enjoy the death of Daniels parents and let alone how could he film that all without daniel knowing. This is very intriguing. _




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Quote: I never had a brain until Freak came along and let me barrow his for a while, and thats the truth the whole truth...he did the talking...I had a way of saying things with my fist and my feet before Freak came along.

Response: I was confused when I read this. What does Maxwell mean by he had no brain without Freak, does this mean him and Freak are a pair but how can they; they haven't scene each other since pre-school. And how can they be a pair Freak is brain and almost no bronze and Maxwell all bronze and no brain.

Quote: ...calling me "Earthling" which by itself is pretty weird right?...I am an earthling...But we don't call each other earthling. No need.

Response: I had to stop and think when I read this. I never actually stop to think about the idea of us calling each other earthling. I mean it is correct, but we almost get offended by it. Maxwell says it's like calling you your nationallity but we get mad if someone does that, but should we. I am completely lost.

Quote: "The Blade and his gang".."Go to the left" he says."Make it quick, if you want to live"!..."I'll cut you down to size. Dice and slice baby!"...I can see him, see the pointed white grim and his eyes so dark and cruel.

Response/Conflict: I was excited when I read this. Maxwell and Freak are having a major external conflict with Blade and his gang. Maxwell and Freak are now tag teaming to escape the evil clutches of Blade and his gang. Freak is creating ideas and solutions to the problem while Maxwell is running as fast as he can fighting the Blade gang, knowing that Blade will kill them if he has the chance. I am excited because this is the start of the main plot of the story and how Freak and Maxwell become Freak the Mighty. To some this is scary but to me I feel this is the start of the newest ultimate tag team.

Quote: "sorry, wrong number" "Not so fast" he says. "Who sent you"? I've heard of Iggy Lee and he's the boss of The Panheads, this bad news motorcycle gang.

Response: I was worried when I read this. How could Max not know that this man is the leader of a vicious bicker gang? They must be feeling alot of irony. They go to give someone back their purse who they think is helpless but really it is the complete opposite an Iggy might hurt them.

Quote: He must be Gwens kid."Killer Kane what a tough hombre he was". "He's got religion, is that true". Iggy scowls

Response: I was shocked when I read this. How does Iggy and Lorretta know so much about Maxes and Freaks parents. Does this mean their parents and them were friends and does this tie into why all thier grandparents don't want to talk about thier parents and what does Killer Kane mean.

Quote: "Over my dead body" "A man needs to protect his family". "Not with a gun"! " You don't know about guns" "Of course I do I was in the army" They're talking about Killer Kane. "He's on parole"

Response: I needed to stop and think when I read this. This means that Killer Kane, Maxes father, is free after he murdered a man. Why would he be allowed out of prison? And is it right for Grim to get a gun; he may be protecting his family but is it right for Grim to kill his son.